My summer holidays

Hi, my name is Gemma and today I talking about my summer holidays.
First I went to Port Aventura. Second I went to Cadaqués. Finally I went to my home and prepared for school.

PORT AVENTURA:
I went to Port Aventura from 20 to 22 August with my parents, my friend and my friend's parents.
All day we were in the parc and went to the riddes.
We went to many riddes because there weren't a lot of people.
There was hot but it was very funny.

CADAQUÉS:
I went to Cadaqués from 23 to 26 August.
In the morning we went to the beach but we didn't swim very much because the water was cold.
In the afteroon we went to the village form tourism.
The last day we went to Cap de Creus. Is very nicee!!
In Cadaqués i was very good!!

FINALLY:
I went to my home and prepared for school and i finished my summer homework.


CONCLUSION:
THIS HOLIDAYS WAS VERY GOOD AND VERY FUNNY!!!!

OBSERVATION OF YOUR ORAL PRESENTATION:

PRESENTATION:

- Did you use any resources?
Yes, i did. But the powerpoint didn't see the pictures.

- Were the resources relevant and attractive?
The powerpoint was util for me

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
- Did you look at your audience most of the time?
I often watched the audience.

- Did you read from your notes?
Yes, i did

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
Yes, I did


STRUCTURE
- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Yes, I did

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly,on the one hand, on the other hand,finally..)
Yes, i did

CONTENT
-Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?
Yes, I did

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?
No, i didn't

LANGUAGE
- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?
Yes, i did
- Did you us sentence linkers?(and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although,however..)
Yes, i did

PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?
Yes, i did

OBSERVATION MY CLASSMATS:

Cristina Comalat: She visited Canada. She stayed 3 weeks in England.
Ferran I: He stayed in Calella de Mar and he visited Tunis.
Andreu M: He stayed 3 weeks in Bolton and he visited Egipte.
Francesc R: He stayed 1 week in Can Toni and in August he visited Kenia.
Albert R: He steyed in bolton 3 weeks and he visited Xina.
Albert Q: He went to campus Darryl Middleton and he went to St.Antoni.